Date: 2018-05-10 05:36 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kjn
Thanks. I steal from the best, but in this case I came up with a late change to the last line that really made it gel and improved the song.

The melody I use is rather loose, so there is flexibility, but I also found that I had done a syllable miscount somewhere, so there are some troubled lines here and there. I can do it, though it needs preparation at times.

Yeah, initially there were more lines that didn't rhyme (but kept the scansion), but I think I managed to work everything to rhyme, making that pair stick out more.
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