couple tweaks to It's a Long Way

Date: 2014-11-19 06:27 pm (UTC)
ext_12246: (editor's friend)
From: [identity profile] thnidu.livejournal.com
• He was thinking of some hot food, and maybe some bourdeux.
→ bordeaux

• A shower with his fangirl can he daily share.
→ he can
> The inversion isn't ungrammatical, it's just not colloquial.
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